#016 ~ Athletic Prowess ~ Friday, November 4th, 2005

And finally it is done! Man, did this ever take me a LONG time to finish and hopefully you all can see why. That last frame was really intense in the making and hopefully you can see what's going on in it. If it helps any, the time frame goes from back to front and from left to right. I feel this is a very good example of what this new main character is capable of and shows that she IS capable of doing things other than running away, which you would never have known if I had stuck with the old comic's story line. Of course, that story line had a lot less town time than this new one... *sigh* I suppose you just can't have it both ways can you? Ah well, at least these are good quality comics, even if the story is starting to really deviate from the original here. This was the point in the original comic where the story line really started to decline and become kinda jumpy, disjointed, and text heavy. The result of fixing these problems has greatly streched out the number of comics covering the same time frame. This means that it is going to be quite a while before any secondary characters are introduced. Anyways, I'm fairly proud of the results I got for this comic and for once have very little to gripe about, so I think I'll just leave it at that. Til next time peoples ^_^